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delta1
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 12:44 pm    Post subject: My first... Reply with quote

Can someon check these if it iz tottaly horrible (which it probobly iz going to bE) tell me dso i can make changes :D


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trineroks
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 2:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

well... since i know it's your first time in mapping, i'll not go harsh on you

delta... your maps need a lot of work Sad you got strange triggers, one of your maps has a replicator but no triggers (which means there are no win triggers or a trigger to start up the replicator!) The Find Andy spawnpad mission has no trigger to create an andy once you step on the pad, one mission says that if you and your opponent own 10 hydras, then you win (??) and some missions you start out without even having credits!! overall, you need plenty of trigger work.

All your maps look the same also. put some diversity!!

and finally, the biggest error i found... All your sides are on "computer" which means that there are no human players. And you set max amount of players as 1 on all your maps. But what I'm saying is that you should go through your maps and change "computer" to "human", and give a name to each of your levels (all your levels' names are called Untitled Level"!!

So please, delta, im not trying to be mean, but take off this map pack and fix your maps.

Meanwhile if you are interested on how to make better maps and learn about how triggers function, check out my mappack here. Download it, import my mission pack, and learn.

If you need any additional help I'll be happy to teach you Smile

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delta1
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 5:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

thank u soooo much trineroks!! Very Happy and i would be Amazed if a master map maker can teach me thank u thank u !! Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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galm
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 7:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hehe he means me his neighbor... Sorry I just wanted to see the ten hydra thing it's hilarious.
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Strobe
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 12:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think u guys mean me. to put it simply all starting map makers must read all the guide, once uv done that then ask about stuff u dont understand.
hers da link: http://sites.warfareincorporated.com/mission-authoring/triggers
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trineroks
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 8:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

galm wrote:
Hehe he means me his neighbor... Sorry I just wanted to see the ten hydra thing it's hilarious.


lol xD i think im as good or better than you Wink

been making maps since the dawn of starcraft

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 29, 2010 6:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ok so can either galm or trineroks help me Wink beacsue i got no clue Laughing wat to do so i would be pleased Very Happy if 1 of u could teach me Very Happy
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 29, 2010 6:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

well... what EXACTLY do you need help with? everything? lol
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