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delta1 Very Active User
Joined: 19 Dec 2009 Posts: 182 Location: New york
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Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 12:44 pm Post subject: My first... |
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Can someon check these if it iz tottaly horrible (which it probobly iz going to bE) tell me dso i can make changes :D
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trineroks Chief Administrator
Joined: 16 Oct 2009 Posts: 1770 Location: Southern Cali (UCLA)
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Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 2:26 pm Post subject: |
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well... since i know it's your first time in mapping, i'll not go harsh on you
delta... your maps need a lot of work you got strange triggers, one of your maps has a replicator but no triggers (which means there are no win triggers or a trigger to start up the replicator!) The Find Andy spawnpad mission has no trigger to create an andy once you step on the pad, one mission says that if you and your opponent own 10 hydras, then you win (??) and some missions you start out without even having credits!! overall, you need plenty of trigger work.
All your maps look the same also. put some diversity!!
and finally, the biggest error i found... All your sides are on "computer" which means that there are no human players. And you set max amount of players as 1 on all your maps. But what I'm saying is that you should go through your maps and change "computer" to "human", and give a name to each of your levels (all your levels' names are called Untitled Level"!!
So please, delta, im not trying to be mean, but take off this map pack and fix your maps.
Meanwhile if you are interested on how to make better maps and learn about how triggers function, check out my mappack here. Download it, import my mission pack, and learn.
If you need any additional help I'll be happy to teach you
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delta1 Very Active User
Joined: 19 Dec 2009 Posts: 182 Location: New york
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Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 5:01 pm Post subject: |
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thank u soooo much trineroks!! and i would be Amazed if a master map maker can teach me thank u thank u !!
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galm ForeRunner
Joined: 18 Oct 2009 Posts: 2382 Location: New York
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Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 7:17 pm Post subject: |
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Hehe he means me his neighbor... Sorry I just wanted to see the ten hydra thing it's hilarious.
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Strobe Semi-frequent Poster
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trineroks Chief Administrator
Joined: 16 Oct 2009 Posts: 1770 Location: Southern Cali (UCLA)
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Posted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 8:01 am Post subject: |
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galm wrote: | Hehe he means me his neighbor... Sorry I just wanted to see the ten hydra thing it's hilarious. |
lol xD i think im as good or better than you
been making maps since the dawn of starcraft
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delta1 Very Active User
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Posted: Thu Apr 29, 2010 6:14 pm Post subject: |
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ok so can either galm or trineroks help me beacsue i got no clue wat to do so i would be pleased if 1 of u could teach me
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trineroks Chief Administrator
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Posted: Thu Apr 29, 2010 6:15 pm Post subject: |
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well... what EXACTLY do you need help with? everything? lol
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